The story branches were quite engrossing and represented an interesting way of telling the story of a man via seemingly disconnected fragments. The descriptions would occasionally drag on, most notably in Wish Upon a Dandelion, but they would do well in describing the thoughts and sentiments of the characters. The large amount of typos makes it clear that this work was unfortunately rushed, but considering the sequence at the introduction, it's apparent that there are far greater plans for this work. I'm interested how this story will unfold, especially as the idea gets more developed!
I really appreciate your review and how you viewed the story and in fact , all you said is valid . The story was indeed rushed and the typos made it even worse and I really appreciate your take on it. I’ll update you on the development of the story bud, and wish you all the best
interesting story, sad, deep, very engaging which makes me wish to get to a good ending, played it for a couple of times so far, really good, keep on the good work
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The story branches were quite engrossing and represented an interesting way of telling the story of a man via seemingly disconnected fragments. The descriptions would occasionally drag on, most notably in Wish Upon a Dandelion, but they would do well in describing the thoughts and sentiments of the characters. The large amount of typos makes it clear that this work was unfortunately rushed, but considering the sequence at the introduction, it's apparent that there are far greater plans for this work. I'm interested how this story will unfold, especially as the idea gets more developed!
I really appreciate your review and how you viewed the story and in fact , all you said is valid . The story was indeed rushed and the typos made it even worse and I really appreciate your take on it. I’ll update you on the development of the story bud, and wish you all the best
interesting story, sad, deep, very engaging which makes me wish to get to a good ending, played it for a couple of times so far, really good, keep on the good work